Friday, June 11, 2010

English Project

My name is Luis Fernando , i have 12 years , live in Belo Horizonte , i like play computer and fight jiu jitsu , i don't like read , my favorite movie is Hancock , my favorite song is The Pill , my fovorite book is Cavaleiro Zelda , i live in my house with my father , my mother and my brother , i have a dog at home. In my free time I like to watch movies.
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  1. CacauJune 28, 2010 at 6:30 PM

    Hi Luis!
    I have just read your text. There are somethings you must pay attention.
    Look!
    "I AM 12 YEARS OLD... and I live in Belo Horizonte".
    "I like READING..."
    Your text has no punctuation. Please rewrite it and be attentive to the structures.
    Don't hesitate to contact me for doubts.
    Bye for now,
    Cacau

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